Friday, August 23, 2019
Why kittens are better than puppies
This is my piece of persuasive writing I have done in writing time. I have already published a piece of writing and this is my second one. Are you thinking which animal is better? well they both are to be honest but I just like kittens more. So here is my second piece of persuasive writing you can find the first piece also on my blog. If you have any feedback please let me know.
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I think so too shhh don't tell Harley dog. You have worked hard on your punctuation in your editing. Your writing is coming along nicely now that its not all one big sentence.
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