Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, August 28, 2019
Why video games are awesome
What is your favourite video game? In writing time we have done a piece of persuasive writing. This is my third and possibly final one. I got my information from myself because of my love for video games. Here is my slide for why video games are awesome and if you have any feedback let me know, other than that enjoy!
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
You have made a great argument for the games you enjoy. You could make the text a little easier to read by changing the background so its not over the image.
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